Let's make a deal...................
You forgive me for LIKING YOU too much,
And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.
You forgive me for MISSING YOU so,
And I'll forgive you for being so cold.
You forgive me for the LOUD RACING of MY HEART,
And I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for PLAYING YOUR GAMES,
And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions.
You forgive me for finding you SO ATTRACTIVE,
And I'll forgive you for not noticing.
You forgive me for RAISING YOU up so high,
And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low.
You forgive me for WANTING TO BE WITH YOU all the time,
And I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
You forgive me for BEING SO PATHETIC,
And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.
You forgive me for not being able TO LET GO,
And I'll forgive you for never having latched on.
You forgive me for having HOPES AND DREAMS,
And I'll forgive you for crushing them.
And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.
You forgive me for MISSING YOU so,
And I'll forgive you for being so cold.
You forgive me for the LOUD RACING of MY HEART,
And I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for PLAYING YOUR GAMES,
And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions.
You forgive me for finding you SO ATTRACTIVE,
And I'll forgive you for not noticing.
You forgive me for RAISING YOU up so high,
And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low.
You forgive me for WANTING TO BE WITH YOU all the time,
And I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
You forgive me for BEING SO PATHETIC,
And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.
You forgive me for not being able TO LET GO,
And I'll forgive you for never having latched on.
You forgive me for having HOPES AND DREAMS,
And I'll forgive you for crushing them.
posted by Nams at Monday, March 13, 2006
7 Comments:
wow !! thats awesome poetry gurl . did u write that yourself ?
Hi... was browsing through arbit blogs by ppl on orkut..
really liked this poem.. good work :)
hi..u really have a superb way of articulating your thoughts in a simple and refreshing way...am really your fan !!
This is a real good one:)!Good Job!
loved this piece of yours...have posted one of mine...somewhat similar...what say??
PHASE
What comes close, really?
Nothing bothers me now
Slowly, your eyes left me here
Alone, like life leaves a dying man
You are everything I had
You are everything I lost
Memory seems like a stranger now
Time, a meer passerby
My past plays ruthlessly with my future
The present dwells endlessly on my past
I remember it was raining outside
And it was raining inside too
My heart - wet and cold
Craved for shelter
Shelter was what I sought
Shelter was what I found in you
You gave me reason to live
You are everything I lost
But I see you in every face I see
Your eyes - they haunt me still
My soul yearns for your touch
That touch which once loved me
But life lives on hope
One can't just sit and muse
You are everything I lost
But, don't they say, he who has nothing, has nothing to lose ?
WOW...the best adjective i could come up with...
have come to ur blog again after ages now only to chk out the words which u have used, i can never try those, even if i want to experess my love.. but u did it gr8...SHOWED IT TO MY FREND AND SHE LIKED.. no she loved IT AS WELL....
Post a Comment
<< Home