Tuesday, August 02, 2005

By The Candles Light

By the candles light....
I drift onto a dreams delight
I see you and me on an island
way beyond the oceans and seas
The flames by the candles light

bring to memory the suns bright gleam
The sense of the rays layin upon our bodies
A gleam of you holdin me....
The intense bright orange flames

reminiscences of the glow from our bodies
Souls combine and hearts beflight...
..Just as the candles light starts to burn oh so bright.....
The flames represent our love....

.So strong, so true, and so bright....
.An eternal flame I hope it remains.....
I awaken by early morn'

to find the candles light still burns
still oh so bright.....

10 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Interesting...
Way to go young lady !!

August 02, 2005 4:01 PM  
Blogger radiohead said...

nice one. Good to see u back Or may be u were never gone.

August 16, 2005 9:19 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Liked it..... do give us more like this one and "a love lost" !
But plz take care not to commit typographical errors in hurry.... affects such a good work :(
( **reminiscences )
Hope the next piece arrives soon.Ciao.
~Sen~
( http://www.thepoetwokeup.blogspot.com )

August 21, 2005 5:59 PM  
Blogger Angshuman Goswami said...

Machau poems... simple yet eloquent

Keep it up. Am adding this link

cheers

October 24, 2005 3:44 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Really well written!!!

October 27, 2005 10:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Nams. I'm trying to put together a list of sites which help people to find a walking partner in their local area; just like this one 'walking partner'. I thought you might be able to help. Do you know of any other walking partner related sites? Many thanks.

November 18, 2005 10:14 AM  
Blogger Jas said...

cmmon, why did u stop bloggin?

January 27, 2006 9:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

long time no posts ?

February 04, 2006 10:46 PM  
Blogger Crush said...

hey

nice one!esp loved the poem in your profile.. keep writing

April 01, 2006 7:23 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Gr8 poems... i m impressed.do u write dem urslf?
seriously dey r really very sweet n touching. very senti...
keep it up

May 05, 2006 8:13 AM  

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