Saturday, August 26, 2006

A boy n a girl.....


Boy-i saw her today

girl-I saw him today

boy-it seems like it's been forever

girl-i wonder if he still cares

boy-she looks better than ever

girl-i couldn't stop staring at him

boy-i couldn't even look at her without crying

girl-he couldn't even look at me

boy-i asked her how things were going

girl-i asked him about his new girlfriend

boy-I'd pick her over any other girl

girl-he loves his new girlfriend

boy-i told her i miss her

girl-he didn't mean it

boy-i mean it

girl-he's probably really happy now

boy-i held her for the last time

girl-he gave me a friendly hug

boy-then i went home and cried

girl-then i went home and cried

boy-i lost her

girl-i love him.

3 Comments:

Blogger Nams said...

had written this long back.. while recovering from a break up.. with surity it wil touch all the readers somewhr it shdnt :)

August 26, 2006 2:03 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Call it coincidence,but i just happened to read a forward in the same pattern,not really sure if its relevant to this,but its important to know that all's well that ends well.Read this-
this is a
between a
girl and a boy on their 7th year anniversary


girl calls up boy: hey happy anniversary again
boy: hi happy anniservary!... hey remember you wanted to tell me
something after school? sorry i left so early i had to go to work. so
what did you want to tell me?

girl: i wanted to say i love you
boy: yeah i know everyone does!

girl: really?

boy:yeah... everyone of my friends that are girls tell me that everyday
girl: oh... but am i only your friend?
boy: no... youre my girlfriend... why?

girl: so when i say i love you i really do mean it

boy:yeah i know you do mean it...its just that you dont need to tell me
that

you love me anymore cuz i know you love me since the day we been
together
and i love you more each and everyday.

girl: ......

boy: so wanna go somewhere tonight for our 7th anni?

girl: yeah... where?
boy: i dont know... maybe movie then dinner?

girl: ok

boy:ill pick you up after i get off and get ready ok?

girl: ok. what time do you get off?

boy: in 2 hours and then i gotta go home and yeah get ready which takes
about 15-20 mintues...
girl: aye... i thought you didnt have work today...

boy: one of my co-workers called in sick

girl: oh okay! so ill see you around 7:30 then?

boy: yeah! and babe?

girl: yeah?

boy: i love you

girl:i love you too!

boy: ok my manager is like looking at me so yeah.... i gotta go.

girl: ok bye

boy:bye

2 hours later... the boy drives to his girlfriends
house
boy walks up to the door and rings bell

girl: hey! (gives a kiss to her boyfriend)
boy:wassup... you ready?

girl:um... wait... let me get my bag and we could go ok?
boy:ok

they both watched a movie and ate dinner.... once they were
done eating they head back to the car but before she got into the
car...

boy:wait! can i blind fold you?

girl: why??!
boy:its a suprise
girl: what kind of suprise?

boy: a big one
girl: okay but only if you promise me that you will hold my hand while
we're driving.
boy: i promise.

girl: ok blind fold me...


so they drove off........... and then they stoped.

boy:ok we're here!

girl: where?

boy:wait let me walk you to the place!

girl: what place?

boy: somewhere! (and gives a kiss to her on the lips)

girl: babe!...

the boy walks her to the place


boy: ok.... let me take the blind fold off

girl: where are we?


he takes it off her and
she opens her eyes and sees the view of the
city and at that same spot... thats where he first
asked her
to
be his
girlfriend...


girl: omg.... (tears come down)

boy: why are you crying?
girl: this is where you first asked me out...

boy: what are you doing the rest of your life? (he asked on his knees
and
after he says that...behind him... in the air it says
will you marry me?" in firworks)

girl: (tears come down faster)

boy: i wasnt at work when you called me... i was planning this whole
thing!
girl: get up!

boy: yeah?

girl: (kisses him)

boy: is that a yes or a no?
girl: yes

August 26, 2006 10:48 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Strictly --Generalising Comments :

hia, poem is nice and i understand the feelings behind it. i can read in between these lines of how painful it would have been, but i strongly suggest and feel that if the person on the other side could make a grave mistake ( may be of betrayal , loosing trust on counterpart , comitting and then not serving it) then the punishment is well deserved. Punishment could be anything and everything. It strictly will depend upon the boy and girl in discussion ( may be of the poem ).
" As life moves on with time and so should we ".

If one wants to stand and wait thinking that time will change , situation will improve and circumstances will sometime favour him/her..its upto that individual ( may it be a boy or grl ) of what he/she is thinking.

We all know that time does not wait for anyone , oppurtunities knock hardly and we got to be quick and smart to encash...There is no looking back in relationships, (leaving out blood relationships ).
so then what are we waiting for...just relax and wait for the next oppurtunity !
May be the earlier one was not destined.
Message to one and all : Do right and be responsible for your actions . If you have made a mistake , dont repeat and thats what will make you a better humanbeing on the earth !
LOST IS LOST!!!!!!!!!!!!

cheers
sa

August 27, 2006 4:18 AM  

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